Wednesday, November 19, 2014

Peotic Response (3)

Peotic Response(3) to "The Metaphor" by Budge Wilson

Cold & Warm





At Home,

I live in a jail-like tall building.

There is a cold machine

that makes my heart cold and dark.






At school,

I live in a party that never ends.

There is a special birthday cake,
that makes my heart warm and alive.






But, because of me,

The cake is gone,

and the party is done.


2 comments:

  1. wow. nice work posting on things other than English assignments. I enjoyed this poem. Good work extending the cake metaphor for Miss Hancock

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