Peotic Response(3) to "The Metaphor" by Budge Wilson
Cold & Warm
At Home,
I live in a jail-like tall building.
There is a cold machine
that makes my heart cold and dark.
At school,
I live in a party that never ends.
There is a special birthday cake,
that makes my heart warm and alive.
But, because of me,
The cake is gone,
and the party is done.
wow. nice work posting on things other than English assignments. I enjoyed this poem. Good work extending the cake metaphor for Miss Hancock
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